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This is no way to live,
But there's not way to die.
I see your face in my tears,
Every time that I cry.

Now the truth is out,
There's no where to run.
But I was living a lie,
My life had barely begun.

But what can I do,
But what can I say.
Now I'm livin' my life,
Livin' it my way.

The battle is lost,
The winner is clear.
My only wish,
Is that you could be here.

I shed more tears,
I choose to remain.
Living my life,
In this needless pain.

And so it begins,
And it will depend.
On what happens next,
For how it will end.

So wandering lost,
I whisper your name.
All I wish,
Is that you felt the same.
©2009 ~rlh1994
:iconrlh1994:

Author's Comments

I recon this has to be one of my best ever poems. Also one of my longest.

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:iconwhitetiger230:
tis good^^

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:iconrlh1994:
thanks^-^

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A poem can never lie, but nor can it speak straight truths.
:iconfeenathecute:
This is an amazing poem, and I hope to see more like it. ^^

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:iconrlh1994:
thanks,

It helps that had really big inspiration

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A poem can never lie, but nor can it speak straight truths.
:iconfeenathecute:
:)

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